Storyboard is quite simplistic. You could improve it by further reference to shot types, camera movement and transitions. Also number each scene clearly.
Added annotations: When the perpective shot is over the character jessica the heartbeat music will play to add to the convention of the thriller being tense. When Jessica is getting ready a radio could play to add to the convention of her innocence. Finally, by having long shot of her getting her breakfast in the kitchen is shows her day to day life, but as she walks out doors adding the tense music shows something bad could happen. This is shown in many films to build suspense.
Storyboard is quite simplistic. You could improve it by further reference to shot types, camera movement and transitions. Also number each scene clearly.
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ReplyDeleteWhen the perpective shot is over the character jessica the heartbeat music will play to add to the convention of the thriller being tense.
When Jessica is getting ready a radio could play to add to the convention of her innocence.
Finally, by having long shot of her getting her breakfast in the kitchen is shows her day to day life, but as she walks out doors adding the tense music shows something bad could happen. This is shown in many films to build suspense.